{"id":2544,"date":"2016-10-04T05:00:21","date_gmt":"2016-10-04T09:00:21","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.allandouglas.com\/blog\/?p=2544"},"modified":"2025-04-21T01:56:38","modified_gmt":"2025-04-21T05:56:38","slug":"dialing-up-your-dialogue","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/dialing-up-your-dialogue\/","title":{"rendered":"Dialing Up Your Dialogue"},"content":{"rendered":"
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A good way to draw your reader deeply into your story is to use a variety of non-verbal cues in your dialogue. \u00a0Try the following techniques to dial up your dialogue.<\/p>\n

Facial Expressions<\/h2>\n

When a character raises an eyebrow or furrows his brow, this action gives the reader an additional clue beyond dialogue that indicates a change in the character’s emotional state. As the scene progresses and the emotional intensity rises; the character’s dissatisfaction grows into anger, for instance, the character might clamp his jaw, his nostrils may flare, or eyes narrow to a squint, his face may redden and so on. These are all commonly understood signs of anger.<\/p>\n

To learn effective use of these cues, read classic works containing emotional encounters or watch good dramatic films with the sound turned off.\u00a0 Study the facial expressions of the actors and take notes of how they signal emotion.\u00a0\u00a0 <\/p>\n

Talking With Their Hands<\/h2>\n

Characters can point or jab to intimidate, steeple their fingers during thoughtful reflection, clench their hands into fists or pound a table in anger.\u00a0 Crossing their arms in front of their chests indicates resistance, throwing up their hands in resignation or despair (this gesture is often overused) or holding their hands up to surrender.\u00a0 Rubbing the temple or forehead with their fingers often accompanies stressful thoughts, and pounding a thigh self-recrimination.<\/p>\n

Use Movement<\/h2>\n

One character may cross the room, gaze out a window or push back from a table to get physical and emotional distance from a heated conversation or intimate moment with another character. Moving in closer they can become more threatening or intimate, or drive a point home by occupying the others entire scope of attention.<\/p>\n

If a character puts a piece of furniture or some other object between himself and another character, that’s a clear cue that he’s blocking the other character; emotionally, physically or intellectually. Use movement to support and enhance your dialogue, and the scene will be rendered more clearly in your readers mind.<\/p>\n

Displays of Emotion<\/h2>\n

Depending on your character’s personality don’t be afraid to have him take big actions\u2014throw a fit, throw an object, or throw a punch. If your character has a hair-trigger temper, bypass eyebrow raising and go straight to breaking the furniture.\u00a0 If more reserved, use the cues to indicate a slow build-up of anger, passion, fear, hopelessness or joy.<\/p>\n

The actions you choose must be consistent with your character’s traits. Every cue action should reflect the character’s personality and emotions, and clarify the scene. Even if your character rarely shows emotion, using small details to show his true feelings leaking out: a tightening around his eyes, a tight grip on a pen, deliberate or forceful steps as he walks around a room.<\/p>\n

Show, Don\u2019t Tell<\/h2>\n

Avoid using adjectives and adverbs to tell your reader what the character is feeling, describe the character himself.\u00a0 For example; instead of \u201cHe turned angrily on her.\u201d, try \u201cHe turned on her, anger flashing in his eyes.\u201d\u00a0 Instead of \u201cThe amorous man reached for her.\u201d, try \u201cWith passion swelling within him, he reached for her.\u201d<\/p>\n

Physical cues like these make it easier for your reader to see and feel your character\u2019s emotion, even when their words belie that emotion.\u00a0 Craft your characters’ words with care\u2014and back up the emotions with physical cues to telegraph their true feelings to your reader.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

A good way to draw your reader deeply into your story is to use a variety of non-verbal cues in your dialogue.  Try the following techniques to dial up your dialogue. Facial Expressions When a character raises an eyebrow or furrows his brow, this action gives the reader an additional clue beyond dialogue that indicates … Continue reading “Dialing Up Your Dialogue”<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[10],"tags":[126,28,29],"class_list":["post-2544","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-tools","tag-dialogue","tag-fiction","tag-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2544","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2544"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2544\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":21485,"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2544\/revisions\/21485"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2544"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2544"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pineymountainfoster.org\/thoughts\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2544"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}