Sci-Fi Sample: Tale of the Draggon

The following is chapter one from a book I wrote in 1984.  It is part of a trilogy.  The publishing houses refused it back then.  After wall-papering my office with rejection slips (it was a small office) I packed it up, tucked it away and forgot about it.  A recent decluttering brought it to light again and I’m thinking of producing it as an eBook.   I have always considered fiction to be my weak suit.  Please read this sample chapter and give me your opinion as to whether or not this book has potential to sell.  This is a Sci-Fi book, if you hate Sci-Fi, you are excused, thank you for coming, I hope to see you next time.  To the rest of you, if you saw this as a sample of the book, would you find it compelling enough to buy the book?

Thank you for your input, feel free to be honest, that is what I am asking for.

Revised per suggestions: 4/15 Continue reading “Sci-Fi Sample: Tale of the Draggon”

The Broken-Down Temple

temple in disrepairMany Christian organizations feel that erecting a magnificent building in which to worship honors God. Some claim that the Holy Spirit lives in such edifices. Not true!

Acts 7:48-49 says:

48 “However, the Most High does not dwell in temples made with hands, as the prophet says:
49 ‘Heaven is My throne,
And earth is My footstool.
What house will you build for Me? says the Lord,
Or what is the place of My rest?
(ref: Isaiah 66:1)(NKJV)

And in Acts 17:24 we find: Continue reading “The Broken-Down Temple”

Being Happy in Unhappy Times

I don’t know too many people who say they are not concerned by recent world events, the economy, and the current political climate.  In fact, most people I know spend a lot of time being angry or frightened (or both) about these things and so much more.  Yet, the Bible tells us that, as believers, we are not to worry.  About anything.   How can we do that?

In the modern vernacular “worry” means to be anxious or disturbed.  The Greek word translated as “worry” is merimnao, which also means to be anxious and that comes from the word merimna which means “to be divided or pulled apart”.  This is appropriate because worrying about things outside of our control will only pull us apart from God and the peace He promised us. Continue reading “Being Happy in Unhappy Times”

Grim Reaper Comes for Pop-ups

“Marketers will kill everything good.” – @GaryVee

grim reaper pop-upPop-up ads (in case you live in a cave somewhere) are those panels that “pop up” over the content you are trying to read on many web sites. Sometimes they tout products or services for sale, but more often they ask you to join a mailing list. They are the most annoying form of advertising I have encountered. And … they are very effective. Continue reading “Grim Reaper Comes for Pop-ups”

Using an Unreliable Narrator

two-faced illusion
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It is said that there are three sides to every divorce: his side, her side, and the truth. This colloquialism alludes to the fact that people will slant their narration of events to suit their own perspective. Really, it goes beyond that because there are times when a participant in an event is not just biased, but incapable of seeing the whole picture because he or she does not have all the facts or is so set in their own view they will not see it any other way.

A writer uses narration to give the reader information that is not being directly observed: backstory, private thoughts, or events that have happened “off screen”. Continue reading “Using an Unreliable Narrator”

A Closer Kingdom

“I will give you the keys of the kingdom of heaven; whatever you bind on earth will be bound in heaven, and whatever you loose on earth will be loosed in heaven.” – Matthew 16:19

Christian lifeWhen I became a Christian, all the instruction I received about the Kingdom of God was to protect myself from the corruption of the world, to avoid spending too much time with “sinners,” and to hold on until Jesus came back. Christianity was presented to me as a waiting game not something I could be active and thrive in. Getting to heaven simply meant avoiding Satan. Continue reading “A Closer Kingdom”

On Seeking Readers

A painter paints pictures hoping that others will see them. A musician plays for the ears of others. An actor or dancer performs for the benefit of an audience. Writers write to inform, inspire, or entertain readers. In each case, these artists are incomplete without their audience.

island_desertedEven print-book authors benefit from running a blog where their readers can learn more about the author and even interact. But a blog without readers is like a musician on a deserted island. If we write on a blog – especially if we are just starting out – how do we find an audience? Continue reading “On Seeking Readers”

The Way into the Kingdom

What a wonderful thing it must have been to live while Jesus walked the earth, to see him heal and cast out demons, to hear him teach about God the Father and The Way. And yet so many of those who did see and hear marveled at it all, then walked away: rejecting his message.

His disciples noticed this too. In Luke 13:22-30 we have this discourse:

The Narrow Way

22 And He went through the cities and villages, teaching, and journeying toward Jerusalem. 23 Then one said to Him, “Lord, are there few who are saved?”

And He said to them, 24 “Strive to enter through the narrow gate, for many, I say to you, will seek to enter and will not be able. 25 When once the Master of the house has risen up and shut the door, and you begin to stand outside and knock at the door, saying, ‘Lord, Lord, open for us,’ and He will answer and say to you, ‘I do not know you, where you are from,’ 26 then you will begin to say, ‘We ate and drank in Your presence, and You taught in our streets.’ 27 But He will say, ‘I tell you I do not know you, where you are from. Depart from Me, all you workers of iniquity.’ 28 There will be weeping and gnashing of teeth, when you see Abraham and Isaac and Jacob and all the prophets in the kingdom of God, and yourselves thrust out. 29 They will come from the east and the west, from the north and the south, and sit down in the kingdom of God. 30 And indeed there are last who will be first, and there are first who will be last.”

narrow way, broad way

When Jesus worked miracles and astonished many with His teaching, the Jews were hopeful that He was their promised messiah. But, they were expecting a military leader, someone who would rise up against Rome and restore Israel to preeminence among all the nations. Naturally, the Pharisees and Sadducees would be this leader’s cabinet, his governors over this new world order. But Jesus taught forgiveness, love, and repentance. He wanted them to abandon their traditions and follow Him in a new direction. So they rejected Him, despite all they saw and heard.

Today, Jesus does not walk among us, we cannot listen to Him declare the truths of God. That is done through the Bible: God’s Holy Word, and the urging of the Holy Spirit. But now, as it was then, mankind does not want to hear what the Gospel tells us, so mankind edits The Word through exclusion and re-interpretation. Mankind wants to build a wider gate through which to enter Heaven.

But mankind does not build gates into Heaven, only Jesus grants that access through the authority given Him by God the Father in Jesus’ death and resurrection.

The door that the Master of the house closes in the parable is death. As long as we are alive, we have the ability to accept Jesus. Death locks that door closed.

On the day of judgment, many of the people of Jesus’ day will say, “We knew you, you taught in our streets. Let us in.” But He will refuse them admittance because they rejected Him.

On the day of judgment, many modern Christians will say, “We worshiped you and did many great works in your name, let us in.” But if they followed an edited gospel, they followed a gospel of their own making, not that of God. In so doing, they carved their own God to follow. And on that day, Jesus will tell them, “I do not know you, where you are from. Depart from Me, all you workers of iniquity.”

There will be some who are considered mighty men of God by this world: respected and followed by a multitude, who will be turned away. And there will be those who were despised by this world as “Jesus freaks” who will be welcomed and given positions of preeminence in the kingdom of God.

That is not my opinion: that is what The Word says. That is what Jesus told the people of His time, and His words stand as truth today.  Read His Word for yourself.  Follow its teachings.  Be careful who you trust as a teacher.

The Visitor

I am not fond of snakes. Snakes are, at best, creepy and, at worst, deadly. So I avoid them. This, however, has not always been my opinion.

As a youngster I found grass snakes and garter snakes fascinating and often made (temporary) pets of them. Much to my mother’s chagrin.

In one elementary school science class it was a special privilege afforded only to the top students to “wear” the class boa constrictor for a portion of each class period. I kept my grades up more for this badge of honor than for academics sake.

Snakes were fascinating. Continue reading “The Visitor”

Dialing Up Your Dialogue

how to write effective dialogue
Source: Englishdybayday.net

A good way to draw your reader deeply into your story is to use a variety of non-verbal cues in your dialogue.  Try the following techniques to dial up your dialogue.

Facial Expressions

When a character raises an eyebrow or furrows his brow, this action gives the reader an additional clue beyond dialogue that indicates a change in the character’s emotional state. As the scene progresses and the emotional intensity rises; the character’s dissatisfaction grows into anger, for instance, the character might clamp his jaw, his nostrils may flare, or eyes narrow to a squint, his face may redden and so on. These are all commonly understood signs of anger.

To learn effective use of these cues, read classic works containing emotional encounters or watch good dramatic films with the sound turned off.  Study the facial expressions of the actors and take notes of how they signal emotion.   Continue reading “Dialing Up Your Dialogue”